Lucy in Writing Class

Tuesday, March 20, 2007

The graph shows the demand for electricity in England. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. As can be seen, a majority of people tended to use heating rooms and heating water. Further, the survey data suggest that some English use the electricity on ovens, kettles, and wahsing machines. On the other hand, 15% of English had the demand on lighting, TV radio, and the rest of 15% required on vacuumming, cooking and electings.

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Norbit

This winter vacation I saw a movie named Norbit. It’s a comedy acted by my favorite comedy star, Eddie Murphy. He played three roles in the movie, Norbit, Mr. Wong(the orphanage owner and ran a restaurant) and Rasputia (Norbit’s wife). He made three quite different kinds of characters lively, and he was successful.


Norbit was an orphan, raised up by Mr. Wong, and he had a great soulmate, Kate. But one day Kate was adopted and left Norbit to begin her new life. Norbit became lonely and he met Rasputia (a very fat girl) when he was nine. When they grew up, they got married. Because Norbit was a timid person, he was always teased by Rasputia’s family. A dramatic change was that Kate returned to the town with her boyfriend and met Norbit. Kate wanted to buy the orphanage where she grew up when she was young from Mr. Wong, but the place was taken the fancy by Rasputia’s brothers. Kate’s boyfriend and Rasputia’s brother made a deal to prevent Kate to buy the orphanage, which was noticed by Norbit. Norbit tried everything to help Kate to stay away from danger, disregarding the threat of Rasputia in any available ways. At last, Norbit had a happy ending, and he married Kate.


Indeed, I think that Eddie Murphy devoted himself deeply to this movie. I can feel that he touched my heart. He is born an actor to make audience happy. Also, it is a good comedy film that I recommend you watch it with your family.

Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Make the sentences academically respectable and defensible

1. In some cases, attractive people tend to have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.
2. Seemingly, the economic sanctions assumed to be ineffective.
3. According to simulation studies, in some circumstances alcohol influences people to become violent.
4. The quantities displayed assumed that passive smoking may cause cancer.
5. Some of the evidence indicate that recycling might be the best solution to the waste disposal problem.
6. There is little possibility that physical exercise may prevents depression.
7. It seems that deep tunnels could be safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than shallow tunnels.
8. The latest series of sutdies question that the private schools could provide a better education than public schools.

Tuesday, March 06, 2007

Qualification-- in class writing

The forms that overseas students need to filled in
Last year all overseas students completed University Registration forms. All students need to finish the University Library Membership Application forms. Most of them should fill in the National Health Service Registration forms. Some students have to write in the International Student Identity Card Application forms. A minority of student have to fulfilled the Accommodation Office Application forms. Few of them have to accomplish the Magazine Subscription forms.