In-Class Assignment
The emotion of love
Many people might have a questionin their mind, that is what is the love? Let's find the definition through the dictionary. It says that Love is a profound feeling of tender affection for or intense attraction to another. Love is described as a deep, ineffable feeling shared in passionate or intimate interpersona relationships. What's that kind of feeling? To tell you the truth, it's hard to difine it. Also, it's also hard to separate it into a good or bad emotion. The only thing we can make sure of it is that we all live under LOVE. What kinds of love? There are many kinds of love. Love relates to your parents, brothers and sisters, teachers, and friends. Those make you live under your parent's love, sibling's love, teacher's love, and the love fom friends. Easily to say, love is around us. Only need us to spend time to discover it, isn't it? At last, I would like to share a quote from Emily Dickinson: Love is anterior to Life, Posterior to Death, Initial of Creation, and the Exponent of Earth.
posted by 露西 @ 10:31 a.m.
10 Comments:
You have a profound explanation aout LOVE. Really good. I enjoy reading it. I think love between family members is the greatest in the world, and I don't agree with love at the first sight. What do you think about?
I haven't had this experience yet, I'm not quite sure to tell you that do I believe the love of first sight. I personally think that the first-sight-love is some writer's imagine, and that's the reason why some novels are so popular.
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Lucy, I am surprised that you gave back a response so quickly. I appreciate that. Your idea is creative that the first-sight love may be some writer's imagination. Very good. In my opinion, it exists in life. Yet, if people love someone else at the first sight, they usually fall in love on impulse. Agree?
By the way, I would like to give some suggestions.
In your response:
I haven't had this experoence yet, so I'm not quite sure if I believe the first-sight-love.
In your article:
Line 1: Many people might have a question in their mind, which is what the love is.
Line 11: "Only need us to spend time to discover it, isn't it?" --> It makes us feel safe, secure, loved and wanted.
In additin, there are some typo errors.
I like your quotation in the end of the article.
I haven't had this experience yet, ...
It seems that this topic is animated to discuss.
I agree to teacher's definition about the love at the first sight. Even the homosexuality!
Thanks for your suggestions and remind me don't forget the love.
Sorry to the typing errors, I have the responsibility to all my blog readers, I'll try very hard to avoid these kind of errors.
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Only you, Lucy.
You are one of two students who make the most of the writing blog in this class so far. I cannot but give you my respect. Also, I am very pleased with you performance. I hope that I can help you a lot with your writing.
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Thanks teacher! Of course I should learned more from you, too. That's why we pay the money for! (jusk kidding)
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