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1. MAIN IDEA
Who? Phoebe Wang Where? S.T.U.T, 6th dorm When? 10/20/2006
2. BODY
Basic background information
* from Jungli, study in S.T.U.T, a two-year collage student, now live in 6th drom.
*There are 4 people in her family. She's the first children. Has a younger sister who is studying in the second year of high school.
*Her hobby is reading, shopping, know everthing about investiment.
*She wants to work in a foreign business company, and she is preparing the test for International Trade Institute (an institute to train someone become a foreign trading person).
Writer's personal reactions
*She's a full of confidence person, have many great ambition in the future.
*She's a quick reader, really read many books when she's free.
*we have something in common: like to go shopping in the department store, like to watch movies.
*We'll keep being roommates together
3.Conclusion
We are roommates now, although we knew each other for 5 years, still have many things we do not know to each other. We enjoyed to live together.

3 Comments:
Good. You can prepare to write your descriptive essay. It will be better if you can write more about Phoebe's characteristics.
Your outline is clear and organized. I am looking forward to your essay.
Your outline is well-organized and no grammar mistake. I think your draft 1 will be great.
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