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My room-mate Phoebe
Have you ever had an ideal company in your whole life? I'm sure everyone might have one or more good partners in your life. Luckly I found one nice company in Southern Taiwan University of Technology. She is my room-mate. Her name is Phoebe, in Chinese is Szu Hang. It is a great preasure to more about her and become her good friend. Next on is the interview about Phoebe at S.T.U.T. in the Sixth Dorm on October 20th, 2006.
Phoebe comes from a family of 4 people. It include her parents, a younger sister and her. Her father is a retired soldier. Housekeeping is her mother's job. And her sister is a high school student, studying in the second year. Her hobbies are reading, shopping, know everthing about investiment. She is a quick-reader. She'll read novels as much time as she has. That's why I think reading much makes her becoming a quick-reader. Shopping is also her favorite leasure activity. Sometimes she'll let me see some advertising brochure from a famous department store and we will discuss it together. Also, she likes to know everything about investiment. She is like an analyst knowing what is cheaper or more expensive, also she can tell you which item should be better to choose that will save your money. On the other hands, she have a burning desire to know everything about I.T.I (International Trading Institution), because She said that she wants to work for the foreign companies in the future.
After the interview about this lovely girl, I think she is step by step reaching her goal. We have many things in common, like shopping, watching the movie and so on....... We are the best room-mate in school, and also a good company in the future.
Actually, we were from the same school but in different class at our forthe school, but until now I know clearly about her. I hope we can be good friends, partners, and also room-mate in the future.

2 Comments:
I think your Draft 1 is very great and interesting.
Great draft one!!
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